An All New “This Automatic Eden” For You! (Shorter / Faster / Better)

Hello from Brooklyn!

It’s been another crazy few weeks working towards “The Genesis Engine” release, and just to make my life more complicated I ended up doing a major rewrite of “This Automatic Eden” 😀

Wait, what?

It’s easier to explain in a video so here you go! (And yes I have a gimpy eye hehe, I took a frisbee to the face which left some damage. I really should get an eye patch for an authentic pirate experience 🏴‍☠️ so, yeah, sorry about that.)

If you don’t have 4 mins to spare to watch this, here's a quick summary: 
After editing “The Genesis Engine,” I took what I’d learned from that and applied it to my two published books. “The Paradise Factory” was in good shape, but I found parts of ‘Eden’ didn’t work so well. Specifically, the start was too slow, and a meeting with Charles Takamatsu too ‘philosophical.’ What Alice and Charles discussed was interesting to me, but it slowed down the middle of the book too much. So out that all went!

All in all, Version 2.0 is 17,000 words shorter (around 55 pages) while maintaining the same plot. All that came out was ‘unnecessary’ world building and character studies that are best used elsewhere.The new version is much tighter and faster paced, and bridges books 1 and 3 far better. If you read it a long time ago, or gave up on it, please check out the new version! 

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I love hearing from readers and fans, so if you have any questions or comments just email me back and lets chat. Until next time – have fun and stay safe!